My
first child, a boy, is due in a few short weeks, on July 4th!
"Dependence day," we're calling it. Nine months, gone in a
flash. My entire life, at the brink of transformation.
I mention this because the decision to procreate and its
subsequent inevitability embody change in its two most basic
forms: the kind you consciously bring about, and the kind you
can't avoid.
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Change
(cheynj):
The passing from one place, state, form, or phase to another;
transformation or modification. To make the form, nature, future course,
etc. of
(something) different from what it is or from what it would be if
left alone.
As a noun, it's inevitable, the state of the universe; it's going
to happen whether you like it or not. As a verb, it's something
you can actuate; you have the power to bring it about.
This month, this year, this life, roll with the changes you can't
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Writing Intuitively, Part Two
Coaching tips,
techniques and resources for writers
In the novel I’m writing, fire
images recur ad nauseum. Boats burn, yards burn, dogs leap through
flame, etc. The repetition eventually caught my attention, and my
rational mind recoiled. Why so much fire? This is nonsense, man,
stop it!
I made a conscious effort to snuff the flames, despite an urge to
incinerate things in almost every chapter. Thousands of words later,
I caught myself writing a scene in which an entire prairie burns.
Then it hit me: fire was the solution to motivation problems my
protagonist had been struggling with since the novel’s inception.
Intuition was trying to clue me in, but my rational mind, with its
insistence on reason, wouldn’t listen.
How can intuition be accessed and employed in writing? What role does
it play in the writing process? I asked a poet, a nonfiction author
and a novelist how they harness their intuitive power. Here’s a
summation of what they said:
Warm up. Read
something before you write, to create an aura of intuition and give
yourself an opening into an idea or feeling. Take a word, phrase or
mood and transfer it to the first moments of writing. Something
emerges onto the page intuitively, in the context of your project,
and then you can develop it.
Listen. Open
up to your inner voice and hear what it’s saying. It might be the
voice of a character, or a wiser version of yourself. Don’t force
it, just wait for an idea, snip of dialogue, image, etc. that grabs
you. If it rings true, use it.
Pay attention. Be
aware of urges and hunches while you write. If you feel a pull in
some direction, go that way. When you’re having trouble making a
decision in your piece, there’s usually an intuitive wisdom that
knows what to do. If you pay attention, the decision’s already
made.
Play. Intuitioncomes through most easily when you’re having fun. Stress and
worry shut it down. If one chapter seems more fun than another,
work on that one, even if your rational side doesn’t like the
sequence. You have to stay loose to open the door.
Interpret. It’s
not always obvious what to do with intuitive insights. Sometimes
you have to zoom back and ask yourself how they fit into the big
picture. What do they mean? How can they contribute? Allow
intuition to come through first, then let lefty figure out what to
do with it.
Intuition is the spark that ignites
great writing, but like the smell of distant smoke it’s easy to ignore
and rationalize away. In most of us, the rational mind is well
developed, while intuition is largely suppressed. But where’s the
logic in that? If both are needed to produce our best work, doesn’t
it stand to reason that we should develop intuition?
Next time, with help from Shakti Gawain’s excellent book,
Developing Intuition, I’ll outline some steps you can take to get
rational and light a flame under yours.
Reads for Writers
Coach Doug's picks
for improving your writing life
Getting Things Done: The
Art of Stress-Free Productivity,
by
David Allen
(productivity/self-help)
Ever have trouble finding time to write? Or banning that
to-do list from your mind when you finally get some? Me,
too. I picked up David Allen's book hoping it would help,
and it did. A lot. His premise is straightforward and
simple:
Productivity is directly proportional to our ability to relax.
Makes sense, right? When's the last time you wrote well with
half your mind on something else, with feelings of confusion,
anxiety or overwhelm churning in the background because other
things in your life weren't getting done? Probably never.
According to Allen, reaching
our creative potential and achieving effective results is possible
only when our minds are clear and our thoughts are organized.
To function at our best, we need a reliable system for tracking
and managing all the "open loops" in our life: projects, tasks,
meetings, phone calls, etc. When you know your open loops
are being effectively managed by a system outside your head, you
can achieve a state of productive relaxation, reacting to workflow
intuitively, with a fluid 'mind like water'.
Allen's system takes time and effort to implement, but it's worth
it. I've been using it for only a couple of weeks and I've
already noticed a huge improvement in my efficiency and
organization, and in my mental state at work. I know
what to do with every item that lands on my desk or in my inbox,
and I don't lose track of things that can't be handled right away.
What a relief. No more
psychic weight from things undone, and for me this translates into
lots more writing time, distraction-free.
Amazon link
THE STORY OF EDGAR SAWTELLE, by
David Wroblewski (fiction/novel)
Selection #62 in Oprah's Book Club needs no exposure from the
likes of me, but I'm including it here anyway. Any book that
can keep me engaged for 500-plus pages, and distract me from
writerly analysis despite my best efforts, deserves a
recommendation, even if it's already selling in the trillions.
Edgar Sawtelle, mute at birth, grows up on a Wisconsin farm, where
his family breeds dogs. Antagonized by his uncle, Edgar is
forced to flee into the wilderness until he can prove the cause of
his father's death. That's the premise, more or less, and it
sets the stage for a deeply engaging novel. But that's not
the only reason to read: There's a ton of great writing in here,
too--if you can keep your head above the story long enough to pay
attention.
Take the prologue, for example. If you want to know what a
good one's supposed to do, look no further. Wroblewski's
creates immediate suspense and raises questions that we remember
some 400 pages later. And setting? His transcends idle
background to become a major driving force in the story. His
characters are motivated, and developed through clearly defined
conflicts. His images and descriptions are sharp and
resonant. His point of view switches are purposeful and
well-timed. And if you're thinking of writing about dogs,
this novel is a must-read user's manual for doing it well.
Amazon link.
Stolen Goods
Monthly writing,
skill building and problem solving exercises
A big challenge for many fiction
writers is to create characters who act on their desires
rather than just thinking about them--characters who move
intentionally toward change. Clearly identifying a
character's motivation for action is challenging, too--especially
when you want the action to both arise from and embody the
motivation. Here's a fun, versatile exercise you can use to
explore the relationship between motivation and action.
To start, go through your house--junk drawers, closets, garage,
whatever--and look for objects that catch your interest.
Quirky, suggestive objects with lots of associations tend to work
best. Maybe you find a grubby baby booty, or an old family
photo, or a brand new pair of ski goggles, still in the box.
Once you have something you like, sit down and free write for ten
minutes about why your character stole that object. Write in
first-person, from the point of view of the character.
You'll be surprised by what you discover, and how relevant it is
to your story. Once you determine your character's
motivation for stealing the object, go on to explore other aspects
of the situation. Who did she steal it from? Where?
How? What happened afterwards? What did she do with
the object? Who is she confessing to? What does her
confession reveal?
This exercise is great for deepening existing characters and
creating new ones, revealing hidden motivations and desires,
developing new story lines and subplots, etc. If it works
for you, try it on a larger scale. Dream big. What if
your character stole a baby? A family history? A ski
resort? The motivations behind theft are rich and complex,
and not always criminal; they can reveal a lot about who your
characters are, how they're motivated in your story, and how
they're likely to change by the time the plot wraps up.
If change is on your mind but stolen objects don't strike your
interest, try an open free write from this month's
photo
prompt and see if it sparks some ideas.
*exercise adapted
from Now Write!, edited by Sherry Ellis
Powerful Questions
"Quotes"
The right question can change your outlook, challenge your
assumptions and set you on a new course. How would you answer these?
Are there changes currently happening in your life that you're resisting? What
might happen if you
embraced them instead?
What changes would you like to make
in your life/writing/relationships that you haven't yet acted on?
How would you benefit from making them?
What concrete actions can you take
this month to bring these changes about?
"It is not the strongest of the species that survives, nor the
most intelligent, but the one most responsive to change."
-
Charles Darwin (Naturalist; 1809-1882)
"If
you don't like something, change it. If you can't change it,
change your attitude. Don't complain."
"Change will not come if we wait for some other person or
some other time. We are the ones we've been waiting for.
We are the change that we seek."
-
Barack Obama (U.S. President; 1961-)
"Change is inevitable, except from vending machines."
-Unknown
Coach,
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the Coach Training Alliance and earned his MA in creative writing
from the University of Colorado, Boulder. His compassionate,
results-driven coaching helps writers find the inspiration,
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